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Forgive Me

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For your own sake - forget me.
First attempt @ writing a six word story <3

I promise I'll try to write more longer pieces soon haha. My head's still not quite out of the Love Is Enough verse though, so yeah... Just gimme a little while~

This is based on that btw. :P

Comments and critiques are much appreciated!
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3wyl's avatar
Ooh...

I like the way the title is different as if to say that by forgetting, one will forgive, or perhaps through forgiving someone, one should forget? Does that make sense at all? :O

I like the phrasing and the way you've got the last bit in italics as if to say that the process has already begun.

Great stuff. :nod: